Feedback: Draft 1

From the feedback we recieved we decided that the title sequence was too long. Most people commented on the sequence being too long and the music being too repetitive, some people say there was no build up. Lots of people also mentioned the video being too dark in some parts and too light in some parts (like the scenes of the classroom). We decided to reshoot all of the scenes in the classroom and re edit the video to be shorter. We also thought of an idea for a build up, a door slamming and the character reacting to it and then cutting off. When reshooting we decided to not use a studio light, because it makes the room too light, and use a smaller light instead. We decided to emphasise the sound during the build up in post production and using foley sound of a door slamming shut.